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My first essay, EVER.

Discussion in 'Post your Creations' started by Snow, Feb 19, 2017.

  1. Snow Writer of stories Member

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    I am so sorry to have written this, what was I thinking.
    Idk how old I was when I wrote this.
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  2. Sami Retired Staff Retired Staff

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    hello jillian kappa
     
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  3. Snow Writer of stories Member

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    Since my ign is Jillias idc about people knowing my name :\
     
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    Don't be sorry for your old creations.
    You were young; it's not expected to be Shakespeare, and of course it's going to appear a lot more different to you now at an older age than it did when you were younger.

    Believe it or not little things like this make a pretty big impact. Especially now since you are a writer, you can look back on this and be like "Wow, I was writing way back then!" And who knows, maybe this was a starting point to what made you enjoy writing (I wouldn't know, but it's a hunch).

    I actually have a bunch of old junk, whether it be scribbled drawings or even small stories (but the text is hard to read), that I made a LONG time ago and sometimes I like to look at it and tweak it a little bit; turn something old and make it new.

    I don't know, I think it's great to reminisce on old stuff and see what your mind used to think like back then. But a main point I want to get across is that it was pretty cool to share something like this, especially on the public forums. Goes to show how much you trust this small community. :)
     
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  5. Snow Writer of stories Member

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    Yes, looking at old writing is quite fun. These little 'journal' entries we were forced to do were always the best part of the day back then, because I loved to write even then.

    And yes, I trust this small community because the players on the server are very nice (for the most part), and have helped me become the person I am today Belive it or not, Planet Beacon has made a huge impact on me. The players here such as @Firepoke @Slimey-Kun @FunkyBear @GreenEmerald9 and a couple others have encouraged my writing, and helped me grow and work on my communication skills.

    (Especially @FunkyBear analyzing stuff because she is very smart)

    I plan to find a few other items and post them to this thread soon :)
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    Wow, as long ago as it was, I remember drawing both of these. The memories are vague though.
     
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    Oh my lord that spelling test though. I was a god at spelling in first grade, probably because I was reading at a 5th grade level.


    Also, you forgot to blur out your name, Jillian.
     
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  7. blabpth Moderator Staff Member Moderator

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    This is a ..... MASTERPIECE! Don't draw on your tests! But that drawing is amazing.
     
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    I should try to find one of my old drawings from when I was like 5 or 3... ok nvm because everyone would cringe into rasins and be confused because they were basically scribbles.
     
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  9. Snow Writer of stories Member

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    I didn't forget, I just do not care if people know my name :)
    WE SHOULD GET @FunkyBear TO POST HER OLD DRAWINGS >:D
     
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    Not gonna lie, I forced my parents to throw all of my old stuff out but looking back I would have loved to have it.
     
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    Strangely enough, I can relate to this, its actually kind of sad that I can, but I can.
     
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  12. Snow Writer of stories Member

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    Was that an insult?
     
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    Course not, i've just been in the situation before. :')
     
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  14. Snow Writer of stories Member

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    Deja vu

    I've been in this place before

    (I'm sorry xD)
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    Shut up, Jillias, no one asked you.

    Salty much?
     
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    Ren.png
    This is what we call boredom
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    This is what we call art
     
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    xD Ikr
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    Also... My attempt of anime Snowy Snowy.png
     
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  18. Snow Writer of stories Member

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    Why is my head and arm all lopsided
     
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  19. GreenEmerald9 Active Member Member

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    You're looking to the side ;-;
     
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  20. Snow Writer of stories Member

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    Well a more accurate representation of me is more like this:
    My hair and eyes are light af
    and my skin is pale too
    My arms are hella skinny too
    And don't forget my glasses
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